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Days of Rhyme and Snoozes

I sit here relishing a custard-filled and chocolate-topped choux bun. If I had a trumpet I’d surely blow it. It seems that I’m “An Emerging Poet” and, icing on the cake, I’ve “got potential”. Imagine my elation at such an unexpected elevation. My many years of scribbling, so long unheralded, unheard, pleasing but me and me alone, and now at last the gods atone for past disdain and disappointment. Yet even as I contemplate my new persona, I surely know a day of reckoning awaits. In old age now, my words grow trite and rusty. I fear that, sitting here, awaiting inspiration for yet another new creation, my rhyming days are almost done and, truth be told, I’d rather have another deliciously inspiring bun, to be followed by, maybe, just perhaps, another of my afternoon naps.

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Date: 2/8/2023 7:09:00 AM
Many thanks for your comment, Ms Dilly Dally. Just a bit of fun with perhaps the slightest grain of truth !
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Date: 2/8/2023 6:56:00 AM
Completely capturing an image and a mood perfectly.
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Date: 2/15/2022 5:08:00 AM
You are a man after my own heart (and stomach). A vicariously delicious litany of thoughts, images and impulses familiar to those of us of mature persuasion.
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Peter Rees
Date: 10/5/2022 1:32:00 AM
Thank you for your recognition of our mutually enjoyed condition.
Date: 2/2/2022 6:32:00 PM
…. You have captured your state of mind and these moments in time so deliciously Peter ! I love I’d rather have another deliciously inspiring bun, to be followed by, maybe, just perhaps, another of my afternoon naps. Wonderful !! Keep writing your rhymes . Hugs, Susan :)
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/3/2022 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Susan for this lovely comment. I’m so pleased you enjoyed . I can recommend the buns.
Date: 2/2/2022 9:17:00 AM
Loved this Peter! I love reading your poems. Have a bottle of wine and some roses on me to go with your (M&S?) choux bun. You deserve it. Cheers - Gary
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/2/2022 9:38:00 AM
Brilliant comment Gary. Thank you. And yes, you’re right about the M&S Choux bun.

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