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She rolled down her silky sheer stockings gives him a saucy sexy look, imaging his hands there instead gently coursing her trim figure. Feels his eyes following his hands, as she submits to her passion. wishing that he could lay with her as they transcended to heaven. Alas it could never be, for he, was only a marble statue. Crafted by her, in memory of the hours they once had shared

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/23/2015 7:15:00 AM
This is both passionate and sad.
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Date: 6/1/2015 7:41:00 PM
Nice poem. The entire time I read, I could envision the words. Nice writing
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/5/2015 2:30:00 PM
ty m.n.i.w hugs
Date: 5/23/2015 10:34:00 AM
Dreams are the beginnings of seeing a poem there, as you have demonstrated here. Powerful and poignant. A 7
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Date: 5/23/2015 4:14:00 PM
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Date: 5/1/2015 6:54:00 AM
A truly beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:35:00 AM
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Date: 4/30/2015 1:30:00 PM
Beautifully done, Shadow. And a very creative daydream.
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:34:00 AM
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Date: 4/29/2015 1:42:00 PM
This poem was innovative, captivating, and three dimensional in character. Emile.
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:34:00 AM
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Date: 4/27/2015 7:08:00 PM
Daydreams are real until we open our eyes and see the painful truth... A very sad, but moving write. Really great work, Shadow!
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:33:00 AM
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Date: 4/26/2015 8:54:00 PM
Well Done Shadow
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:02:00 AM
ty Jerry hugs

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