Daybreak and Waves Break

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Early morning quiet Waves kiss the shore And gently caress in loving embrace Singing delightful sounds as they ebb and flow The call of the Seagulls Pierces early morn air While a loner Gull gains speed over ocean's surf A tinge of rose dots the eastern sky A time to be alone for early risers What delight the cool, quiet, and feelings of saturation By moist air, sounds of nature and God's presence All being offered at once Balcony at the shore Facing the eastern sky Daybreak and waves break Could I ask for more?

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Katie Telling

Date: 4/22/2012 8:01:00 PM

This is so beautifully written. And so peaceful :)

Jack Horne

Date: 4/7/2012 7:12:00 AM

wow, i felt i was there - beautiful piece, my friend. about your holiday/

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/6/2012 9:18:00 PM

I agree with you Sara, there is no peace like looking at the vast waters of an ocean and being there so small and alone. What a powerful vision!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/6/2012 11:23:00 AM

Wow! VERY, very beautiful descriptions of the sea. I see those lone gulls a lot and the shriek of gulls lasts all day here. What a great, creative title. No one could ask for more than "Daybreak and wves break." Exceptional writing, Sara. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2012 9:38:00 PM

Sara, this is very beautiful... very peaceful... something like this would fit me about now..always..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/5/2012 9:28:00 PM

This is truly a lovely write my friend! I love your lines, "What delight the cool, quiet, and feelings of saturation, By moist air, sounds of nature and God's presence" this it the epitome of the whole write here! I love how you combined nature and God's presence within your poem, that's was definitely my view of the whole thing as well! I really enjoyed your write that I have read read this evening! I love very much your poem immensely. Thank you for sharing this poem! Great Work!!

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/5/2012 7:05:00 PM

Sounds like a place where we all want to be! I live in DE and love enjoying the peacefulness of the ocean waves. So therapeutic. This poem has brought me back to where I need to be to clear my mind.. Awesome imagery and wonderful poetry my friend. It has been a while since my last comment but you have captivated me nonetheless... Good to see you again my friend...JP