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Daybreak

Daybreak So cold the night, like dead man’s hands, Alone the weary watchman stands cloak wrapped against the scything breeze, His salt burned eyes cast to the seas. Charts, geometric instruments, In Illuminated casements, All glint and gleam by candlelight, Dancing devils in darkest night. Useless tools for starless skies adrift and blind until sunrise, The crew uneasy, standing too, Awaiting dawns first signs of blue. Then, with a hint of indigo, Heavens wide edge begins to glow, Slowly, nights darkly shade rolls back, Bright gold expelling deepest black. Our spirits rise to greet the dawn as details of the world, redrawn, by the rising fiery lord of light, Appear to our returning sight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/16/2016 8:41:00 PM
Superb descriptive write... Love the indigo bit... Can almost witness the glory... Of daybreak you so vividly describe...
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Bertie Bond
Date: 10/17/2016 5:39:00 PM
You are very kind Keng, thank you for your much appreciated comments.

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