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Daybreak

The raucous sounds of a bird call Awakens me to a lovely dawn The sky is awash with the warm tones That tells me another sunny day is born The palette of nature a  sight to live for Watching and listening to nature at its best The geese flying over, an elongated dark shadow Off to the lakes to spend  their day at rest The robin and its twitchy movements Constantly looking for worms and such A family to feed plus territory to defend Short life to live, a happy one nonetheless The blackbird parents I see next Flying low so they can  see Nuts and seed left for their breakfast Just a  song is all I ask of he Time for a coffee to drink at leisure In this my fresh smelling new day In a garden that gives me pleasure Will try and paint the scene per-se Penned 22 September 2013 waking at 6 am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 11:37:00 AM
Seren , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~SKAT
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Date: 10/4/2013 5:56:00 PM
Beautiful, Seren. Excellent. Nice going. Congrats. luv, Ralph
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:48:00 AM
Congrats on the great winning work..Enjoyed morning through your eyes..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:47:00 PM
SEREN, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:50:00 PM
Lovely poem about morning..uplifting. BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/24/2013 6:35:00 PM
Hello B.G. glad you enjoyed it ...Seren
Date: 9/21/2013 5:28:00 PM
beautiful daybreak poem My favorite part of day. Good Luck in the Contest SuZ
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/24/2013 6:35:00 PM
Mine too Suz .....Seren
Date: 9/21/2013 10:12:00 AM
You described the scene perfectly. I feel like I am experiencing it for myself
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/24/2013 6:36:00 PM
Hello Monterey, glad you liked my words ....Seren
Date: 9/21/2013 5:39:00 AM
You have already painted this scene by your beautiful words that you have written! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening write here this morning! Your words resonated with me perfectly, I felt the joy and pleasure of your glorious morning by what you wrote my friend! What a tenderhearted piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/24/2013 6:36:00 PM
Hi Russell, glad you liked it ...Seren
Date: 9/21/2013 4:40:00 AM
I have too written a poem Break of the Day, I enjoyed feeling the early morning. Good luck if it's for contest. Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/24/2013 6:37:00 PM
Thanks Ram ...Seren

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