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Day of Summer

Son,look the sun is out big and hot up the elm tree Come look at the new shadow of the shy ant, you and me. Hurry,go sit by the meadow an ear out for the repartee of the shrill caw of the crow and the dim hum of the bee. Let's grab our ham and cheese eat it by the sea of old trees, and sip in the wet ale of breeze. Boy, dip in the day of summer, ere the gay hot sun is dimmer and the red hue not so glimmer. Written 04/19/2016

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:41:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your "FUNOM'S SONNET win." LINDA
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Linda:)
Date: 4/27/2016 11:00:00 AM
Well done with a very difficult form.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks james
Date: 4/25/2016 8:45:00 AM
Congrats Sara, for your awesome WIN with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Teddy!
Date: 4/20/2016 10:44:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sara..
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/21/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 4/20/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you very much for giving this very fine entry. The contest had lots of wonderful entries and grading them was a hard nut to crack, nevertheless you came out tops.. Kudos to you and thank you so much once again.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/21/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Funom!
Date: 4/20/2016 1:36:00 AM
Sara Chansarkar, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/21/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 4/19/2016 10:34:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Beautiful imagery!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/19/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thanks, wrote this for 'Funom Sonnet' contest where each word is to be less than 3 letters except the last word in each line!
Date: 4/19/2016 10:28:00 AM
Sara, this is a delicous sonnet. Your words took me away from the drab place where I live ! Thank you.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/19/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thanks, wrote this for 'Funom Sonnet' contest where each word is to be less than 3 letters except the last word in each line!

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