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Dawnsway

I was his earthquake Shaking the ground at which he stood He was an iridescent pebble I tossed him like a skipping stone across the ocean But I always found him On a beachy island brought in by the waves Stranded on a mountaintop Shining in a desolate night Dropped from the claws of a heron Landing in my sea of basal tears Rising up he lit the sky For he was my light And with a single sadness I could bring my sun Back to me Shifting the day Lengthening time For he told me I could make the Dawn sway.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/2/2017 4:14:00 PM
Just wish I could write like this....purely amazing.
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Iris Blade
Date: 7/8/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much! I haven't been posting lately as my laptop broke but I have many poems I look forward to sharing!
Date: 5/20/2017 7:13:00 AM
Ohhhhhh IRIS, such a beauty of a poem. You're a talented writer :) Glorious imagery this is. So many lines ther I wish I would have written.
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Iris Blade
Date: 5/22/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it. The kind words inspire me more than you know.
Date: 5/16/2017 11:51:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and I love that phrase making the "Dawn sway" I wish I had thought if that. Wonderfully written Iris.
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Iris Blade
Date: 5/19/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you so much! I always had juggled these words around my poetry and finally found a spot to put it.

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