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Ever these gifts from Eos of dawn, Her mornings gently purling with ray’s early luster To herald new sunrise, a jasper flare-- Robed in ornate chiffon waltzing quietly On marbled hills, on awakened floral glide: How fragrance explodes into creamy nectar Luscious as her avian flock and bahiagrass, With dainty hands strewing mist upon trees Through chants of daybreak's invocation, Granting all with tokens from maiden prayers… And we offer beads of gratitude and homage For newborn dreams yet to be fulfilled, Till she renders vestal light to the wild of noon. For Anthony Biaanco's Gifts Contest : 6/18/2020

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Date: 6/25/2020 3:17:00 PM
I am in no doubt you will be placed high or even win the contest. Your imaginative prowess is second to none.
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:25:00 AM
Beautifully said. Congrats Nette.
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Date: 6/22/2020 8:50:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Nette. Much love :)
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Date: 6/22/2020 5:16:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for constantly sharing your poetry gift. God bless you.
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Date: 6/21/2020 11:32:00 PM
I like "beads of gratitude". Congrats on your win, Nette ~ John
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Date: 6/21/2020 10:36:00 AM
Wonderful write with great imagery, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/17/2020 11:57:00 AM
This is is beautiful Nette! Your stunning imagery is captivating! I loved it xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2020 6:54:00 AM
A pious gorgeous personification Nette. I love how you beautifully blend emotions and imagery :) It is magical. Much love
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Date: 6/17/2020 5:04:00 AM
Lovely...
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Date: 6/16/2020 11:22:00 AM
A heady, breathtaking grasp of the morning that you are, my senses refreshed!
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Date: 6/16/2020 10:00:00 AM
This poem is really outstanding Nette. Your imagery is off the charts it is so beautiful! I am sure this will do wonderfully in the contest. Blessings xxoo
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