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Dawn's Answer

Morning in the metropolis and as light pour from the sky The city awakes! Autos rush by on the FDR drive A thousand cups of coffee are imbibed As people rush to their places of employment They realize that dawn is the answer to the shadows which have grown long in the asphalt homeland Men and women, boys and girls face the glare of the sun Putting on brave faces they do their best to survive The metopolis brings pain but it also brings joy to those who are willing to join in the urban battle which so many have a part in And , indeed take part in today

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Date: 9/7/2019 9:12:00 PM
Hello Matthew … a nice picture of city life in the morning. Thankfully we are rural here with a slower lifestyle - thank you Matthew - Lindsay
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Date: 9/6/2019 7:18:00 PM
You have a way of making us see what you write I truly enjoy that! Another perfect write!;)
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Date: 8/22/2019 1:45:00 PM
Quite beautifully penned imagery.
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Date: 8/22/2019 6:09:00 AM
Dawn is always a welcome sight after the dark, The city is illumed by poets such as you, I depend on it dear Matthew, Keep charming us with your valuable verses.
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:49:00 PM
It takes courage to brave the big city Matthew. Sunrise does help to calm the chaos. Well penned my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/21/2019 6:31:00 PM
Excellent Matthew. That's the metropolis so well painted in a poem, by your poetic hand... Thank you, Panagiota Romios
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