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Dawning

in the dawning of the sun the stars within me rise light hues of reds and blues as sail with blurring stars, susurrus of silky movements awakens me to her morning song our kisses rising with our hearts and through our love into the silence

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Date: 5/4/2015 3:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem filled with great images, you just perfectly draw the overall appearance of the scenic view. Appreciate for choosing my poem among the winners in your contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 4/25/2015 10:06:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, described with feelings written with the heart and edited by the soul. Emile.
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:25:00 PM
Thomas, it is a starry poem full of wonderful words and lines, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, oh turn it off
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Date: 4/24/2015 10:56:00 AM
Love your take on the theme good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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