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Dawn Rises On the River Bend

'Tis still beneath a cloudy sky where the river’s flowing gently by, Red Gums live an artists dream, dead brothers… lifeless in the stream. Reed beds brown along the bank have winters chill now here to thank, as does the willows, yellowed leaves about to fall with freshening breeze. Shadows blur below the shimmer… There's a ring of waves, a leaping swimmer! Wood Ducks glide before their wake passed houseboats tethered to their stake. Cormorants with laborious flight interrupt a Noisy Mynah’s fight, and Pelicans unmoving seem, as they gently glide upstream. The mist no longer rise’s white. The sun breaks through with lemon light… Bend in the river looks forlorn, as day takes over from the dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/20/2015 2:40:00 PM
There is nothing as serene as a river scene...love the description of lemon light.....I have one nit with the word passed thinking it should be spelled past...Correct me if I'm wrong....Good on you, Laurie. Keep writing. SuZ
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/25/2015 2:25:00 AM
G'day Suzanne... thank you for your comment Suzanne. I think the error is not with the word passed, but there should be a semi-colon on line 3. Thanks for making me aware - catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 8/9/2015 11:17:00 AM
A depiction of the dawn before the awakening as nature subtly and methodically changes the landscape and ushers in a new rejuvenating energy that uplifts our spirits and hopes. Emile. #7
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/16/2015 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Emile... your comment is a perfect description - Lindsay
Date: 8/4/2015 4:37:00 AM
Hello Lindsay, Just beautiful---you took me there.....kind regards----John
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/16/2015 10:50:00 PM
G'day John... aren't we lucky that we don't have to travel to visit scenes like this - thank you John - Lindsay
Date: 8/3/2015 5:17:00 PM
We forget that you are experiencing winter. This is beautiful. We have magnificent places to be and to take in!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/16/2015 10:47:00 PM
G'day Duke... yes, but our plum trees are about to flower, so spring is just around the corner. I think beauty is around us wherever we are - Lindsay
Date: 8/3/2015 1:00:00 PM
Damn! Forgot the damn seven. Cheers, Lindsay! :) john
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Date: 8/3/2015 12:58:00 PM
Excellent little poem - most impressed!! You have captured a beautiful fleeting moment in time...well done. :) john P.s A Seven!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/16/2015 10:42:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment John... sitting on the bank of the Murray River early in the morning forced my hand to write what I saw - Lindsay
Date: 8/3/2015 3:17:00 AM
Well written and really enjoyed the imagery.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/16/2015 10:39:00 PM
G'day Mark... I'm pleased you enjoyed this morning scene on the Murray River. Thanks for commenting - Lindsay

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