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Dawn Citadel

Wet furrows slowly churn, his plough horse snorts, a farmer walks, lost to his morning world. Clay sticks yellow to the disc, he kicks at it, the dawn sky is his citadel. Harsh days, like summer, blaze in his memory; confined to this land, his earthly flesh has made a pact. His arms are held like tree boughs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/4/2013 10:45:00 PM
Suzanne, lovely moment captured very sensually, enjoyed it!
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Date: 4/8/2013 6:29:00 PM
Dear Suzanne,This POEM is a Deep from the Heart Tribute to the Farmer. YOUR words are so Gripping so real,I had to wipe my Brow,the "Morning Sun" of yesterdays is hot. Awesome POETIC Art.LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Patient...Harry
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/12/2013 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Dear Spirit patient: I think I was born in the wrong Era. I would have been quite happy married to a farmer..but now I have seen too much so I remember that simple ambition in words LOL
Date: 4/8/2013 3:41:00 PM
wow!!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/12/2013 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Andrea: From you that is high praise.
Date: 4/7/2013 7:02:00 PM
Suzanne, another interesting poem, imagery gone dazed.... enjoyed~PD
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/12/2013 2:56:00 PM
PD....glad you enjoyed and always thrilled to see you in my comment boxes. XOXO SuZ

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