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Dawn Awakening

Awoken from fitful sleep, too uncomfortable to resume Stifling heat prevailing one morning in early June Through dawn's weakly strained golden haze Fresh air my lungs desperately craved To reach the front door, I descended the stairs With door ajar, cooler air, under a fanlight glaze My attention was alerted to warbling of a lonesome bird One continuous note distinctly suspended, as in mid air Uplifted my soul, as another bird's rendition I heard With one accord, in duality, birds pitch perfect paired Heralding in unison further bird answering calls Culminating chorus of blackbirds, larks and song thrush thralls Chirruping in octaves, as though orchestral blendings Glorifying their earthly sojourns in joyous renderings Listening, I stood in deep contemplation As all industrial noise was still in cessation All life in perpetuity as from centuries before us I then realised, I too had been called by the BIRD'S DAWN CHORUS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/22/2014 9:10:00 AM
I love this write. I love Nature and all the animals, especially birds. This was such a joy to read! I am adding this to my fav list and I thank you for it...
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Date: 4/2/2014 12:55:00 PM
Hi Theresa, nice to know you. I really admired the manner in which you were so poetically descriptive in your ode to the morning. Especially the name calling of all the bird species (I'm a bird watcher) I was emotionally caught up in it. Thank you for your comment on my "Sleep"
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/2/2014 1:13:00 PM
Hi Ralph, Nice to know you too. Thank you for taking the time to read this poem. This actually happened when I lived at home in the industrial north in the 60''s. So pleased you found it enjoyable and I appreciate your lovely comments. Regards Theresa xx

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