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Dawn And On

Morning sun invades the skies
And permeates my sleepy eyes

A timer makes the coffee brew
While I begin to stir and stew

Water from the shower head
Invigorates the sleeping dead

Towel dried skin and blow dried hair
In my clothes and down the stairs

Grab a cup and then move on
Get the paper from the lawn

In the car and on my way
Starting off another day



For the Francine Roberts contest, "A Couplet Morning"

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  1. Date: 5/9/2015 7:42:00 AM
    :) I'm a morning person. Enjoyed this look at the start of your day. Thanks for the visit to my work.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:30:00 PM
    I really enjoyed the Couplet form and the simple, easy to digest, poetic flow and imagery.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:07:00 PM
    Ah, but you smell good, that morning shower just gets the day rolling and coffeemmmmakes it so special. Nice way to get going!Allthe bestforthe contest !

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 2:08:00 PM
    Well done Rockman, enjoyed the verse, Smile, vie

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:07:00 AM
    Well done couplet for the theme. Congratulations!! Good luck in all contests.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 2:20:00 AM
    Very good for the contest, wish you luck and hope YOU win. - Have a lovely new day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:39:00 AM
    simple and very well written! nice one!