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Dawn

a dream becomes a musical – chorus of robins

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Md Johnson
Date: 12/28/2019 7:26:00 PM
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Congratulations! Well done.
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Kavyaarasi Muneesvaran
Date: 12/27/2019 10:58:00 PM
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Congratulations. Excellent writing.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/27/2019 10:13:00 PM
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Beautiful! Congrats!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/27/2019 4:08:00 PM
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Very nice, David. Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/27/2019 3:43:00 PM
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Glorious imagery David, beautifully done. Congrats on your well deserved top win. With kindest thoughts Ann
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2019 3:26:00 PM
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Beautiful penning, David! Congrats on your #1 top finish in the contest! Season's best, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/27/2019 1:57:00 PM
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Lovely, David. Love it. Congrats on your top win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/27/2019 1:52:00 PM
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David, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/27/2019 1:16:00 PM
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How beautiful, David. Congrats
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2019 12:41:00 PM
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Sounds good. Wonderful. Kind wishes, Kai
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/27/2019 10:57:00 AM
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Wonderful!! A chorus of Robins!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2019 10:39:00 AM
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So sweet (tweet) Congratulations!
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 9:49:00 AM
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Beautiful imagery... I loved this one liner.. Congrats on your first place in the contest..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/2/2018 2:24:00 PM
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Congrats on your win, David.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/28/2017 4:22:00 AM
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Lovely ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/27/2017 8:31:00 PM
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beautiful, David, congratulations on your win! hugs eve
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2017 2:16:00 AM
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Just looked at the robins in the garden. They sang with the frogs. Congratulations...
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James Inman
Date: 12/27/2017 12:19:00 AM
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David, a beautiful dream this is.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/26/2017 10:05:00 PM
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This is gorgeous! I love it! Congratulations on your win, a fave for me :) xomo!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/26/2017 9:26:00 PM
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FANTASTIC. I just love your short poems, David. I hope your Christmas was merry.
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 6:10:00 PM
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Love your monoku David! Congratulations on your top win!!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/26/2017 6:04:00 PM
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Such a beautifully expressive write David. Congratulations for your top placement with your outstanding poem. ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2017 5:04:00 PM
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This is delightful, David! What lovely music to wake up to! ~ Congratulations on this podium finish. Regards // paul
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/26/2017 3:54:00 PM
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Lovely, David! Congrats. Janice
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/26/2017 2:51:00 PM
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Well done David, congratulations...
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