Dawn

clement moon...loses glow...sun rises rose greets dawn...reassures...tears dewy heart of mist...broken by...dawn chorus rising sun...in shadows...dry stone wall © Harry J Horsman 2013

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David Williams

Date: 3/7/2013 1:14:00 PM

Harry belated congrats on your superb win....David

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 3/5/2013 6:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win Harry, such a beautiful words :) wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, Yanny

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/5/2013 7:18:00 AM

Congrats to you..love the progression of this piece. BG

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 3/5/2013 5:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this most ecellent ellip Harry! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 1:45:00 AM

Congrats on your HM harry my friend well done xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/4/2013 7:03:00 PM

Each image brought such different pictures...then collected together in my mind. Great work !! Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/4/2013 12:38:00 PM

Well done here, Harry...Excellent Win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2013 10:10:00 AM

Hello Harry, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/4/2013 7:05:00 AM

Harry congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 9:57:00 PM

Warmest congrats on this super win Harry.

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/13/2013 4:03:00 PM

A great picture adorned with very acute imagination painted with different sweet colors. Excellent poem just read. Thanks for your all the comments, my very sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/11/2013 3:07:00 AM

All of these were great and meld together well Harry. Loved reading them.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:57:00 PM

yes, seeing it again. I think you might get a very high win with this one. It's nearly midnight and my goal was to be off by then. YIKES.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2013 2:03:00 PM

Very creative work..Good to know that they are contest entry..Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/10/2013 10:54:00 AM

This is cool, harry...love that last one

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/10/2013 3:33:00 AM

Powerful this is, mind tastes loss and then is greeted by rising sun, ... enjoyed the concept... good luck in the contest...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/10/2013 2:28:00 AM

Hi you are at it again with your wonderful writes. xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 11:54:00 PM

wow, Harry, you did like four sets of them to my lowly one!! I am surprised more people are not filling up this ellips contest. It's not so difficult. you did super well with this romantic grouping. I just came on to post my poem and happened to see you had a new post so it was nice to catch you on my way back off tonight. Luv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/9/2013 9:28:00 PM

A beauty..Fits the format nicely. BG

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 2/9/2013 9:02:00 PM

Beautiful, Harry. Always love the dawn. It's so peaceful and dewy.

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/9/2013 6:38:00 PM

well done Harry....Seren