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Dawn

Dawn, like a curious child, peeks through my window. She calls directions– “Be thankful! The air is filled with pages of a cookbook! “Be still! Your mind waltzes at a ballroom pace, your blood pumps fast as bad news.” I stuff my ears with the wool of shorn desires–wiry fingers itch my ear drums. The velvet door opens in a gust, the late winter air catches in my throat. Dawn’s caress moors on my skin, like crows gossiping on the eaves of a landlord’s house. Zephyrs of the collective unconscious tickle my throat & I manage to whisper “Blessed are those who rise each day & breathe.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 4/15/2023 12:25:00 AM
this is beautiful, i love the punchline too yann
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C.W. Bryan
Date: 4/15/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so much! It took me a while to come up with the exact final line so I’m very glad you liked it
Date: 4/14/2023 11:37:00 PM
I like this one - a redefining of that night to morning feel I get obsessed with
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C.W. Bryan
Date: 4/15/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot! Feels a lot different than my typical so I’m happy it resonated. It’s a feel that’s hard not to get obsessed with for sure

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