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David's Moustache

“Why fit in when you were born to stand out?” David Brown, August 12, 2015 David had a moustache It covered his lips It grew and it grew Till it reached to his hips It flapped in the breeze And it frightened small dogs In the winter it would freeze And in the summer catch frogs His friend Juliet, well She begged him to trim it She said that his moustache Had gone way past the limit He hemmed and he hawed And he dithered and dathered But the moustache said 'No! I will never be lathered!' Juliet would not waver She said 'It must go!' ‘It may have looked like your dad's, but that was MANY years ago!’ The moustache, it quivered It trembled and dropped It knew Juliet was a woman Who couldn't be stopped It said 'Goodbye David you will surely be missed, but your lip must get naked If you want to get kissed!’

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Date: 8/29/2015 10:04:00 AM
No contest, the kiss wins out in the end. Clever and fun! Congrats.
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David Brown
Date: 8/29/2015 1:03:00 PM
A double thank you, Richard. One for the kind comment and another for pointing me to the contest. Appreciate your support greatly
Date: 8/17/2015 10:43:00 PM
Wonderful quote n a superb poem David! Congrats on first place win!
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David Brown
Date: 8/18/2015 1:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much
Date: 8/17/2015 3:50:00 PM
This was so much fun to read...the mustache reminded me of the Lorax...Thank you so much for entering my contest and Big congrats on top place..I do hope you try your pen at another Seuss poem for my next contest! :)
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David Brown
Date: 8/17/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for hosting and for your very kind words, Casarah.
Date: 8/17/2015 3:23:00 PM
David, congrats in "Casarah Nance"s" contest... SKAT LOVE
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David Brown
Date: 8/17/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thank you SKAT....always appreciate your kind words
Date: 8/17/2015 1:29:00 PM
Dave had a lip that was covered with hair but Juliet just wasn't hip to hair there/.../ and since he dislikes liking things Julie doesn't, Dave had to shave it off just like it wasn't!/.../Ha! Congrats on your charming win! xoxo
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David Brown
Date: 8/17/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for the very funny and kind comments, Lycia.
Date: 8/17/2015 12:39:00 PM
Wonderful poem, David, congratulations on your win, kisses from your better half is better and sweet than having a long mustache that comes to life a 7, Hugs Eve
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David Brown
Date: 8/17/2015 12:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve, indeed - kisses from the missus are simply delicious...
Date: 8/17/2015 10:42:00 AM
BRAVO! Congrats on the winning poem, And we're ever so glad we got to read... about David's mustache... Yes-siree'!
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David Brown
Date: 8/17/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Carol, appreciate the very kind words
Date: 8/17/2015 8:55:00 AM
ha ha ha love the humour many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Brown
Date: 8/17/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thank you my friend, it was a nice surprise to be recognized.
Date: 7/7/2014 6:40:00 PM
Haha...hilarious.... Tim
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David Brown
Date: 7/7/2014 11:36:00 PM
Thanks Tim, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 7/7/2014 6:38:00 PM
hahahaha hilarious prose :D well im like Juliet who doesn't want to be kissed with someone who has moustache.. :D :P
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David Brown
Date: 7/7/2014 11:37:00 PM
Glad it made you smile

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