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David For David

Oh David, King David You slew the mocking monster You cheated You murdered You repented You were forgiven You were chosen... composing mighty music begging deliverance fearing His wrath pleading mercy... May He show such mercy to us

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Tim. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2012 9:18:00 AM

Very beautiful poem/song! A lovely dedication and i love it! Congratulations on your "super win" my dear friend Tim! love/hugs, LG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/13/2012 12:51:00 AM

Congratulations on another win Tim, well done xx

Joseph May

Date: 11/12/2012 4:57:00 PM

nice tribute Tim...congrats on your win.. well penned

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2012 4:02:00 PM

Tim. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2012 8:53:00 AM

I did not realize that I had not commented on this one..Great work..Sara ...Soup mail..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2012 3:56:00 AM

Bit of a king .... well written for this contest Tim. - Good luck - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2012 3:28:00 AM

passionate explosion of the senses, tim, without the cumbersome of exposition.. best wishes and huggs !..:)