David

Admiring crowds adore his looks; He sure is easy on the eyes, And stands so proud without his shorts, But some refer – ahem - to size… David by Michelangelo For Heather’s Famous Art contest

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/14/2013 11:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest! I knew it was a winner. Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/9/2013 7:40:00 AM

Ha trust yoo Jack, congrats my friend.. xx I was looking at my family tree the other day, we have a Jack Horne in it did your ancestors come from Yorkshire?(could be John Horne when I think about it lol xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2013 8:58:00 PM

Jack, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Heather's "Famous Art" poetry contest. *Goodnight~LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2013 4:52:00 PM

This one I would have scored higher just because it was so dang funny!!! hahaha Loved it. Congrats on your win, my friend.

Heather Ober

Date: 2/8/2013 1:50:00 PM

Jack, this is FANTASTIC! I will never ever look at this sculpture the same way again ;) Your humour never ceases to amuse me. Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 2/5/2013 2:45:00 PM

Very funny, Jack... ope things are going well... Terry

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/2/2013 5:07:00 AM

this is amazing jack,, need the laugh thanks...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2013 11:08:00 PM

hahaha, I LOVE how you did this. You are so clever. I'd give it a top win!!! by the way, the lyrics I just wrote were for Franks' contest. Go listen to the song Hallelujia. (never can spell that word) on youtube and you will see how beautiful the melody is.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/29/2013 6:03:00 PM

I had to read twice to get the gist of it but it finally sank in and I can't stop laughing. Great sense of humor you have! Love, Lizzie

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/27/2013 9:55:00 PM

There was a copy of the famous artwork at Caesars in Atlantic City. I don't know if it is still there now. I haven't been there in years.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2013 8:57:00 PM

an interesting view on this work of art Jack luv ..much luck in contest.. sure have missed u my friend ..on the road back to mend but oh so slow ..

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/26/2013 8:06:00 PM

LOL! Another great entry which I'm sure is headed for the Winners' Circle, Jack! Brilliant. I'm still working on mine. Love, Annalise

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/26/2013 6:35:00 PM

Good job, Jack! I like the humorous aspect of it. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2013 4:44:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Great idea and presentation of the idea..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/26/2013 3:30:00 PM

Ha ha, this great Jack, I love what you have done here my friend! I positively enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What an especially funny piece, Awesome Work!!