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Daughters Love

I shall be telling this with a sigh" Robert Frost
A young girl exploring and free makes a mess for mommy to clean. Never meaning to but making life hard. When you say no, she’ll run and hide her tears. As your heart breaks inside you want to share the tears she cries. Just when you’ve had enough, she comes and gives you a hug. Looking up with those big brown eyes. Struggling as she climbs your thigh. Sitting in your lap she cuddles up giving you a kiss and a hug. That’s when you know a daughters love..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/26/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Any Mother Poem" contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2011 2:56:00 PM
Congrats, Cory. Excellent tribute. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:36:00 PM
I like how you focused on the daughter part of the relationship. Congrats on your win, and thanks for your blog comment. Much appreciated. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:01:00 PM
Congrats Cory on a wonderful win with this tremendous write my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 10/24/2011 6:07:00 PM
Writing from the Mom's point of view. Very nice. Congratulations Cory. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/14/2011 5:51:00 PM
Hi Cory , this is so true , I remember my boys doing the same. great to be back reading your work. Anne
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Date: 10/13/2011 11:00:00 AM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments Cory. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2011 5:57:00 PM
great poem,,,daughters mean so much,,and my daughter means so much,,had a long summer with her and had some health issues that we worked out together,,that is why i havnt been around much,,,so thanks for the comments and for your lovely poem my daughter savanna said it was so sweet....
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:53:00 PM
oh, such tenderness, cory...:) huggs, nette
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Date: 10/9/2011 8:13:00 AM
What a sweet wonderful poem, it's delightful Free Spirit. Have a lovely Sunday :)
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Date: 10/9/2011 2:07:00 AM
Just beautiful, Free Spirit!
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Date: 10/8/2011 11:15:00 PM
HI! CORY,, how are you??? I love your poem,,, i have 2 daughters... and i get lots of love from both of mine.... And i can never have enough... love that is... and sweet looks from their brown eyes,,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 10/8/2011 10:10:00 PM
very sweet n also nice, how it is 4 mommas eyes, what you say is no suprise, yes i have seen it too....
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Date: 10/8/2011 9:15:00 PM
hmm.. like where ya took this.. cogitatively pleasing to me left and right brain~N
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/8/2011 10:11:00 PM
just wondering if this is the case, poor poet off his face, when beams the light...

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