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Daughter of the Gods

Love is blind To all the perils That lie dormant in the mind Beyond the limits of transgression. A mortal maiden golden-haired Priestess of Athena, daughter of the gods By Poseidon with persuasive honeyed words was wooed She melted in their alluring warmth and charm. With guile concealed and flattery he urged her on Her defences crumbled; the drawbridge lowered To reveal the gateway to her heart Forgotten were the vows of celibacy. Beneath his touch her senses reeled Her eyelids closed in expectation He took his chance with urgent need and greed Her virgin spoils were taken. As trembling bodies rode the waves of love and lust Tremors shook the earth, the ocean heaved; the wind enraged Swept o’er the land and lightning flashed across the sky. Such was the wrath of gods defied and disobeyed Terrible and eternal punishment they bestowed. The mortal maiden golden-haired A repulsive hideous monster she became Her fair unblemished skin gave way to loathsome green Her bloodshot eyes in terror gazed, their previous lustre gone Each lock of hair a writhing snake that hissed and spouted venom. Condemned beyond mercy she fled to distant land Where cursed and shunned she lived in great despair Turning into stone whosoever fell beneath her vengeful gaze. At last Perseus took her life. Aided by Athena’s mirrored shield His scythe tore into flesh and bone; her severed head was lifted high. Medusa’s misery and shame came to an end Death – the final liberating act.

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Date: 3/24/2015 9:12:00 AM
A stirring tale, made the more so by your poem's re-telling. Julia, xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/24/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Julia. Pleased that you found this poem to your liking. Hugs // paul
Date: 12/21/2014 2:08:00 PM
I loved all the layers of this piece, you did a fantastic job of telling your story. Thanks for reading my Orange Crush poem, I have now finished part three.
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Date: 12/21/2014 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Richard...love your comments. Will now go and catch up with your series. // paul
Date: 12/1/2014 11:57:00 AM
As a lover of all kinds of mythology, you thoroughly captivated me with this mesmerizing Greecian piece! Brilliant storyteller and poet that you are, you skillfully brought Medusa's tale to life as she transformed from maiden to monster. Excellent work, Paul. All the best, Pandita.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/2/2014 2:07:00 PM
I'm flattered, Pandita! Your feedback is always a source of encouragement...Thank you! Warm regards...paul
Date: 11/25/2014 3:10:00 PM
I'm not super familiar with all the ties to Greek mythology - but this was fantastic! I never imagined Medusa being, at one point, a "mortal maiden golden-haired", but it makes her story all the more interesting. Symbolic of outward beauty turning into poison. Great work, my friend!
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/25/2014 3:27:00 PM
Hi Timothy, good to see you around again!! According to the Roman poet Ovid, Medusa was a beauty! She had 2 other sisters, but seems that she was the only mortal one. The contrast between the beautiful and ugly maiden is one of the main things I aimed at pointing out; hope it worked. Cheers my friend! // paul
Date: 11/20/2014 2:29:00 PM
Wow Paul, what an inspired write this is. I read it several times at first for meaning then just for the music and then a few times more to savor every word.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/21/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Maurice...you wow me! You are a brave person reading my poem so many times:) I'm sending this reply, hoping to get you to read it one more time!! Have a nice weekend my friend. // paul
Date: 11/19/2014 8:45:00 AM
- Greek mythology - Very clever, dramatic and interesting written, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2014 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise, for reading and commenting on my Medusa write; glad you enjoyed. /x/ paul
Date: 11/19/2014 5:08:00 AM
i know this character well.. tragic and indeed sad... sometime before though it isn't much incorporated in our literature subject i read some stories of gods and goddesses... and this one of those.. :) i like how you simplified the story of her.. somehow true love being fought for sometimes the prize is death and misery.. !!! well written Paul!
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:51:00 PM
I am pleased that you found my Medusa to your liking. Yes, hers is a sad and tragic situation. Love can give both joy and heartache. Thank you for the insightful comments Olive _eloi!:) hugs // paul
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:11:00 AM
this one of the stories I read before.. i esp like your 3rd stanza.. :)! the first three lines of this is a wow.. :) and as I progress reading you make the both the plot more interesting as well as there is a build up of emotions why you portray this.. :) a poem well- narrated and drawn.. :)!
Date: 11/18/2014 11:29:00 PM
I had not known the background story of this particular mythological character before today!!
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2014 12:41:00 PM
.....I studied all about Medusa, Gorgons, and other such characters in secondary school (start of my teenage years!) I loved it! // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 11:28:00 PM
OH MY, you sure brought THIS sad tragedy to life!! VERY well told!!
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Date: 11/19/2014 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea....
Date: 11/18/2014 10:32:00 PM
A master story teller -- dangerous are her eyes that turn men's hearts to stone -- nicely done my friend.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2014 4:05:00 PM
Thank you David; I don't usually write this long, but the temptation overcame me! // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 6:11:00 PM
Dear Paul: Lovely write. Lovely read. Well done my friend. Leon
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting positively my friend Leon! Be seeing you. // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 5:56:00 PM
no anger is deeper than when ones own selfworth and dignity is stolen by their own weakness... by their own hands they fall from grace to reveal who they truly are...my first thought after reading this excellent poem
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2014 4:34:00 PM
You are right Frederic. We can easily be the cause of our own downfall. Remorse usually arrives when it is too late. Thank you for stopping by. // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 5:41:00 PM
I love how you weaved this tale in a poem. I particularly loved the lines "Her defences crumbled; the drawbridge lowered To reveal the gateway to her heart" A7 Paul!
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2014 4:37:00 PM
Thank you for finding the time to visit, Arthur my friend; I know you're a busy man! So pleased you found enjoyment in this write....and txs for the high rating. // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 5:14:00 PM
This is a beautiful write! Paul my dear friend well written and love all these mythology and Godss and goddesses heroes but here you have imprinted some of your own wisdom too and make it part of the whole picture.and this what makes it even better. Enjoyed it! A 7 for me! : ) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2014 4:31:00 PM
You read my poem well my dear Dorian! Mythology can be very inspiring; a touch of extra imagination will go a long way to give it a personal imprint. Thank you!:) /x/ paul
Date: 11/18/2014 5:09:00 PM
You make this myth come to life with your words. Your fifth stanza written with such class. A poetic masterpiece! I loved it Paul!#7
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Date: 11/19/2014 3:42:00 PM
Many thanks Connie...you are too kind, but I admit that I enjoyed every word you wrote!:) Take care. // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 4:50:00 PM
Interesting story! Thanks for sharing sweetie :) :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 3:40:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Casarah! Hope you enjoyed. // paul
Date: 11/18/2014 4:31:00 PM
I love the way you gave the tale of Medusa life ,Paul.My cousin who id an artist used to paint a lot of images ,one of his favourites was medusa.I wonder if She still is. I really enjoyed it,Paul.I love the greek mythology and this is Outstanding,Charma.
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:04:00 PM
Hi Charm! Greek mythology has always fascinated me; Medusa and the Gorgons being among my favourite characters. I doubt if I know your cousin, but I know of two artists who carry your surname; one of them used to teach with me in Safi school, back in 1984. Thanks for the visit and support. // paul

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