Daughter of Life Destiny

Hear The Calling To evolve As silky petal Attracting bees as sweet nectar Without falling in the trap of the black spider web Distracting from the purpose waiting to be reached by mellow words susurred in the ears 4-13-2016

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James Inman

Date: 4/13/2016 8:58:00 PM

Lovely write Nayda

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/13/2016 9:53:00 PM

Thank you James

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2016 8:24:00 PM

This strict form is not easy, but you have made it beautiful !! Well done, Nayda! And ps......I must thank you so much for my placement in your 'town' contest...what an honor it is !! Thank you , I was so pleasantly surprised !! :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/13/2016 8:57:00 PM

Thank you Carrie for visiting my poem. Thanks for participating in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2016 5:01:00 PM

Good work..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/13/2016 6:10:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2016 3:26:00 PM

Nice, and I love that last line with the use of "susurred"

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/13/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Andrea