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Daughter of Fall's twilight walks on moistened garden, awakening sweet quietude from earth. Such lure calms fresh meadows as tinted boughs flutter with evening's washed golden pallet, her gift. Contest No 360 of Brian Strand

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Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:02:00 PM

Awesome

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2015 3:47:00 PM

beautiful one, Nette. I need to go see the winners now to see what placement you got. I bet a high one. Congrats!

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/28/2015 9:08:00 PM

A spectacular write, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/27/2015 2:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win Nette

Thomas Martin

Date: 10/27/2015 11:07:00 AM

Excellent! Very original metaphors on Autumn!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/27/2015 7:36:00 AM

Lush images! Congratulations on your win. You should definitely think about doing the Rattle Ekphrastic challenge. I know I would see your name as as winner.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/26/2015 9:28:00 PM

Congratulation nette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/26/2015 9:06:00 PM

Congratulations! CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2015 6:50:00 PM

very beautiful Nette - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2015 6:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for participating in my contest.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/26/2015 6:41:00 PM

Lovely double Cinquain, Nette, full of calm and beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/26/2015 2:03:00 PM

The beauty is oozing out from your Poem like the beauty is spreading its charms in the alluring picture of the Daughter of Fall. Great write dear friend. My good wishes for your superb entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/26/2015 11:22:00 AM

A well and beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest Nette....love always...........A.M.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/25/2015 9:02:00 PM

Well crafted and soothing Nette!

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/25/2015 7:48:00 PM

my mind filled with gold leaves spinning earthward, your poem took me on a peaceful stroll..good luck

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 11:41:00 AM

This visual has inspired you to a duo of captivating Cinquains, Nette. What a delightful offering!! You never falter in your stride...#7 Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/25/2015 8:55:00 AM

This is beautiful, Nette. Delight for the season speaks through all your lines. Best! hugs!

Franco Gonza

Date: 10/25/2015 2:38:00 AM

It isn't easy to weave the natural grace of autumn, still you managed to brush it so effortlessly into a graceful canvas. Great personification!

Ashley Conte

Date: 10/25/2015 2:28:00 AM

The language you have offered here awakens all the senses, joyfully celebrating the new season, a gift of mother earth's comfort! Marvelous poetry!