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Daughter In Law

She is in hunger and thirst, Under the apple tree, Full of ripe apples, Over the tree, She saw it as a poisonous tree, She is in hunger and thirst, Under the apple tree, A daughter turned law after marry!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/21/2014 1:56:00 PM
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Lol...Maybe she just doesn't like apples or wants to ponder about your poem of her after she read it, and wants to do it better under the shade of this tree. Perhaps has bigger branches and limbs, who knows. Lol. ;) Very interesting poem my friend M. I enjoyed it! Cheers! Love and light! xxx D.
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/21/2014 10:25:00 PM
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Thank you so much for your high comment.god bless you dear Potter.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/21/2014 8:53:00 AM
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An interesting one. I can't tell if you like her very much or not but maybe she is not very happy? I enjoyed reading this.
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/21/2014 9:14:00 AM
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Thank you for visiting my small house,you a great poet,Dietrich.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 10/21/2014 8:47:00 AM
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Intersting irony about the apple tree!
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/21/2014 9:15:00 AM
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Thank you so much for paying a visit dear Paz!

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