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Daughter

Above all else A daughter wants to be seen……by her mother There are small big things That are said That are done Those disapproving glances Tiny big criticisms The imperceptible monumental moments The shame that accompanies disappointment The knowing she can’t meet expectations Still she desperately tries All the while a part of her rebels needing to find herself She needs to see herself even when she feels unseen Above all else A mother wants the best…..for her daughter She sacrifices EVERYTHING Including herself Sometimes even the relationship Dreams are powerful destructive things They are forces of nature not easily wielded Pushing pulling Forks in the road Doors to open Potential to achieve Pitfalls to avoid Mothers want the best They stand as guardians of both the past and the future Those things they have lost Those things they hope for They sometimes miss the present They cannot see the paper cut wounds they inflict Mothers Daughters Above all they know each other In the end they have a way of seeing Children of children Hope from hope Do overs Softened voices Glimpses Stories told around dinner tables Laughter Tears Anger and joy The act of seeing and being seen, it takes several lifetimes being joined together.

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Michelle Smith

Date: 1/19/2024 8:19:00 PM

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/17/2024 5:05:00 AM

Indeed a beautiful poem. Enjoy reading it. Blessings

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2024 6:32:00 AM

Blessings to you as well.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/11/2024 11:10:00 AM

Another poem with such truth it unleashed forgotten memories Richard. The trials and tribulations of living with a teenage daughter. Then all a sudden there is this wonderful young woman, amicable thoughtful and precious. A metamorphosis ! Your poem is superb.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/11/2024 11:32:00 AM

Much appreciated. Parents become smarter with each birthday we achieve. Especially after we have kids of our own.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/4/2024 7:31:00 PM

Very creative poetry, Rick, the mother-daughter relationship is a very special one. Your poem painted a true picture of the relationship of most mothers and their daughters. Happy New Year! Have a great 2024, my friend! Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2024 2:41:00 AM

Thanks Bill. I appreciate the visit.

The Situation

Date: 1/2/2024 6:16:00 PM

I know this piece so well in real life. You say it all here.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/2/2024 6:35:00 PM

Thanks for your visit,

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/30/2023 12:33:00 PM

Hi Richard, a Mother daughter relationship is strong and the bond is steeped in past, present and future beliefs, traditions both transparent and upheld. There are no secrets between them, or betrayal only trust, love, loyalty and a passion for the awesome relationship which will last for eternity, far beyond this world. Breathtaking poetry.Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2024 7:06:00 AM

Much appreciated Jennifer. Blessings to you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/29/2023 9:40:00 AM

Wow, Richard! Your poem is amazing! It tells a special story about how moms and daughters have a really strong connection and love each other a lot. It shows how happy they are when they are together. Have a happy New Year in 2024, my friend!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2023 12:34:00 PM

Thanks Sotto I appreciate the visit.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/28/2023 8:21:00 PM

Your poem is a beautiful tribute to the bond between mothers and daughters, and the importance of seeing and being seen. It is a reminder that even in the midst of struggles and conflicts, there is hope for healing and reconciliation. I have three daughters and now three granddaughters. Love them dearly!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2023 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, you are blessed to have 3 daughters and 3 grand daughters. I’m sure you have some great stories. Blessings Richard.

Judy Ball

Date: 12/28/2023 7:15:00 AM

Richard you hit the nail squarely on the head with this most insightful piece. Especially in the 4th and 5th stanzas. This is a fave for me. God Bless, JB

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2023 1:43:00 PM

Thanks Judy. Happy New Year.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/27/2023 10:18:00 PM

Brilliant write as always richard, you’ve dived into the deep aspects of a mother Daughter relationship that at the end of the day is based on unconditional love. While it is nice to read about such relationships. As mothers often selflessly sacrifice for their children, most of my friends do not know or have never felt this love from their mother. Its sad .. which makes me think… maybe some need to give birth when they are mentally ready.however, as a mother, i resonate. ending is soul warming,

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2023 4:52:00 AM

Sorry to hear that. Thanks for this thoughtful response.

Valsa George

Date: 12/27/2023 9:10:00 PM

You know so intimate about the relationship between a daughter and mother. It is a relationship of petty quarrels, divulging of secrets, of joy and tears. Inadvertently mothers inflict pain on the daughter to see her faring as the best one possible, making the daughter rebel. Yet there is a deep bond inalienable running between them which they alone can understand. Beautifully written with deep insight, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2023 9:34:00 PM

What a wonderful response. Thanks for these words. Blessings Richard.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/27/2023 3:52:00 PM

your poem highlights the wonderful, joyful bond between a mother and a daughter. Your last verse said it all. Exceptional write, Richard. Have a great evening, Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2023 9:35:00 PM

Much appreciated Sara.

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2023 11:52:00 AM

This is something many mothers and daughters would agree upon, but some who would not, I guess.. For me mothers are the most precious people in the world and I am a son.. You wrote this one really well..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2023 2:53:00 PM

Thanks my friend. Sometimes having kids brings relationships into perspective.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2023 9:53:00 AM

A deep look at mothers and daughters . Most do ok in the end. But some mother daughter relationships are major catastrophes. I am glad to be one of the good ones. But I envy girls who have awesome relationships with their dad.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2023 2:54:00 PM

I’m glad yours is a good one Andrea.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2023 7:24:00 AM

Yes, mothers and daughters, fathers and sons, and daughters and fathers and sons and mothers all butt heads from time to time, however, most work out okay with some exceptions. thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2023 2:55:00 PM

Well expressed Sara. It as my pleasure to drop by.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/27/2023 6:57:00 AM

Very nice poem of the bond that exists between many mothers and daughters. My wife and her mother are portrayed here nicely, though moreso on the daughter side. Long story

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Tom. Sounds like an interesting story.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/26/2023 3:52:00 PM

Yes, Daughters are wonderful but not always in agreement. The thing I've enjoyed most in my daughter is seeing her growing up to be her own person. She is unique. Thank you for this poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/26/2023 4:11:00 PM

Much appreciated. Thanks for the visit.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/26/2023 11:52:00 AM

Mothers have a special bond with daughters, as you so eloquently described, Richard. Your poem speaks of a loving family--growing together--cherishing life! Heartfelt poem!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/26/2023 11:54:00 AM

Thanks Vijay. A belated Merry Christmas.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/26/2023 9:37:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a heartfelt, deep,evocative and soul stirring poem!Every word resonates with my heart's core as you've so vividly described the bond between a mother and her daughter, both in their own journey of finding their unique essence & identities.Yet,tied with a profound connection.I can feel the emotions here as each of them,wishes to be 'seen',understood and accepted.This piece is a fav for me, quite emotional, as I've the strongest bond with my mum and these feelings here palpable

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/26/2023 11:42:00 AM

If this is the only response I receive, it will have been worthwhile writing my poem. Blessings Richard.