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Darling Melancholy

Across the seas Vision travelling Reaching the horizon Or so it seems… Eyes dissolve into oblivion Ebbing away… perfume of joy Melancholy Residue in my mind Grey soul sees the discoloured world Blinds for the sunlight Caged darkness Rotting mind Negativity Filling the vacuum of melancholy Omnipresent… lingering… Mind.. an escapist… In a faraway land now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/1/2012 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Samanak. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:22:00 PM
., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations Samantak, on a wonderful write and 2nd place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/29/2012 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Caryl! :)
Date: 7/29/2012 6:48:00 AM
congrats Samantha on a fantastic write and win luv.. touching one..
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda! :)
Date: 7/28/2012 10:50:00 PM
Samantha, congrats on your wonderful win with this expressive write. Love and Blessings
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/29/2012 12:53:00 PM
Hi! It's "Samantak" and not "Samantha". I'm a guy! :D ..And thank you for the kind words Rhonda! :)
Date: 7/28/2012 9:17:00 AM
You can feel the melancholy oozing through this poem. Congrats on your win, Samantak! Love, Kim
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/29/2012 12:53:00 PM
That is the intended effect. Glad you liked it, Kim! :)
Date: 7/28/2012 4:15:00 AM
Samantak, congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/29/2012 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, David! :)

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