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Darling Can You Hear Me

Darling can you hear me I'm stood here in the mud, Wishing I could hold you Oh that would feel so good. Darling can you hear me My rifle's in my hand, Soon enough we'll be off Out into no-mans land. Darling can you hear me The whistles set to blow, If I fall remember How much I love you so. Darling can you hear me There's an angel by my side, She's taking me to heaven Today my love, I died. Darling can you hear me Love does not end with death, I could feel your loving arms As I took my final breath. Darling can you hear me Weep, yet don't despair, 'Tis only time that parts us For love is always there.

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Date: 10/6/2019 7:30:00 PM
You've the heart of a real soldier, Gary. So tenderly, yet concisely penned. Great romantic-inspirational write. Best wishes, Gershon
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/7/2019 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. :)
Date: 10/5/2019 10:46:00 AM
Gary, this one is wonderful. Her continuity makes it feel so poetic!
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Date: 10/5/2019 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Caren. :)

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