Darling

Looking into my eyes dark brown dot of light melting choclate a sun rising speck in them blushing clouds your lips sweetly speaking Faraway most beautiful dream east watching her setting within silent whispers warm blowing a butterfly kiss upon wings Floating inside my sweetest ever living memories deep ocean swelling in waves of distant thoughts A mist begins falling veil on a distant faraway dream howling one lonely wolf to the cold moon at night you will always remain pure Most beautiful in my mind because I saw the love in you're eyes

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/8/2014 2:18:00 AM

Darling, is a very beautiful romantic piece! Very lovely Liam! I truly enjoyed it my dear friend. love and hugs! And God bless you! :) Xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/8/2014 3:53:00 AM

dorian smiling thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

BE Bailey

Date: 11/4/2014 7:22:00 AM

This is so beautiful Liam. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day my poetry brother :) Regards "B"

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 1:36:00 PM

you also have a beautiful day dear friend sending you an irish blessing with a smile thank you kindly heartfelt appreciated

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/4/2014 5:26:00 AM

Oh Liam what a beautiful write, I love the line "blowing a butterfly kiss upon wings" it is so soft and lovely, thank you so much for sharing and take care.....Vera............

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 5:34:00 AM

thank you vera you are so very sweet passing you an irish blessing may joy and happiness forever live in your heart deeply appreciated

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 11/3/2014 9:34:00 PM

Well-written piece.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 1:24:00 AM

deeply thank you ndaba for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Timothy Hicks

Date: 11/3/2014 5:46:00 PM

My favorite part was 'howling one lonely wolf to the cold moon at night'... it had an aspect of longing and being misunderstood. You've seen quite a lot in a quick glance at someone's eyes!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 6:05:00 PM

oh timothy it was more than a quick glance it was a holding moment in ones breath just so beautiful i will never forget excellent comment dear pal thank you kindly deeply appreciated

Tim Smith

Date: 11/3/2014 4:49:00 PM

That is exactly where it lies liam....you can tell everything through ones eyes.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 5:03:00 PM

so true tim easy to hide behind closed curtains but the eyes when you look into them in truth they say it all wonderful comment pal bless you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2014 3:44:00 PM

Poetry is divine when describing the eyes! Very lovely writing, romantic like you do so well, Liam!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 3:52:00 PM

thank you andrea for the extremely beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear pal bless you

Peter Walsh

Date: 11/3/2014 12:47:00 PM

Nice write Liam....an unrequited love perhaps...

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 12:58:00 PM

peter so true one that never dies wonderful comment dear friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2014 10:30:00 AM

Ahh!! Very expressive and emotive work..I feel the love..Thanks for all the visits to my pages..Sara

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 10:35:00 AM

thank you sara for the beautiful comment a pleasure reading your stuff

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/3/2014 8:44:00 AM

This is so beautiful Liam. What a wonderful feeling to see that sparkle of love in someone's eyes. Very special indeed.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 9:05:00 AM

so true brenda i wonder does it forever stay because it lives in the heart every day wonderful comment thank you kindly brenda bless you