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A change in my heart Yesturday is forgotten Please, never again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/5/2011 8:21:00 PM
Great Senryu, Edward! It is not always so easy to forget, when there is pain involved, but it will be forgotten through a change of heart. Well done! Caroline.
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Date: 1/30/2011 11:13:00 AM
Hi Edwardo! Such a short piece, but still the idea isn't hidden by a league of endless empty lines. Nicely done! Best to you! Mikki
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Date: 10/20/2010 3:56:00 PM
Very thoughtgful Senryu with good images, Edward
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Date: 10/20/2010 2:49:00 PM
wow! Edward, amazing let the past stay behind, enjoyed,..p.d.
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