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Here I am again, the familiar forest; this time, darker than usual, except for the faint light of the moon hidden behind the tall pine trees. The light is opaque and I am finding it annoying as it plays hide and seek through an oval opening here and there. Deeper in I walk, and then that awful, grim and gruesome thought takes over me...that I may come face to face again with that vicious, vindictive beast in this dark forest. I know it is here...I've seen it before...it rises like a tall, giant monolith, like something I've seen in a museum. I am so frightened. Why do I patronize this place when I always have fear as a prelude to stay away! Is it pride... the need to escape and feel victorious? Suddenly light! Oh yes...I am awake! And how fortunate I feel...amazing! Just my recurring dream. How delightful my nightmare is over. The brilliance of light has overcome my darkness once more! Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Make a Poem *2 ~ Darkness Versus Light Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Judged: 07/27/2016 Required words to use: awful, amazing, annoying. grim, gruesome, delightful.frightened, fortunate, finding, monolith, moon, museum.oval, opaque, opening, patronize, pride, prelude.

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Date: 8/1/2016 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win:) Really lovely write:)
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Date: 7/29/2016 8:05:00 AM
What great story telling! Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations. I can see this a a dream and as depressed mood swings. I like that openness and especially 'the light playing hide and seek'.
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Date: 7/28/2016 7:25:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:31:00 AM
Just knew this had to be a winner, congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 7/28/2016 12:04:00 AM
My gosh, Sandra - that is no less than perfect. In no way does it lack genuine, sincere, finely woven flow. Just perfect. An awe ... CayCay
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Date: 7/27/2016 11:10:00 PM
Congrats on your trophy win Sandra, a great poem indeed! :) Sunita
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Date: 7/27/2016 7:48:00 PM
Great write, Sandra! How different things look in the light of day! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/27/2016 7:08:00 PM
Hi Sandra(Mrs.), You have done a phenomenal job, and this piece is well deserving of first place hands down. Congratulations! :-) Alexis
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:44:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra, 1 st place. great write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2016 5:57:00 PM
superb Sandra congrats on 1st place hugs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/29/2016 2:00:00 PM
Hi, Shadow. I was away for three days and I am finally getting back to PS comments, etc. Thank you again for another great contest, and I am so very honored and appreciative with the wonderful First Place Trophy placement! Thanks again. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/19/2016 5:00:00 AM
Great take on the theme:) All the best:)
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:00:00 PM
This title grabbed me right away and the piece came back to the Light in the most good feeling way to know that it was but a dream that ended overcoming the darkness! I enjoyed this very much! The best to you in this contest! :-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Walter. The title sounds more serious than the write, but that is where my muse led me! Thanks for the visit and supportive comment. Sandra
Date: 7/14/2016 9:52:00 AM
Wow Sandra you are so good at these challenges Shadow sets - i predict another podium place:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/14/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your positive and encouraging comment, Jan. Not sure the approach to the theme is what she is looking for, but we'll see. I did have fun working on it, and that's what counts! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/14/2016 9:08:00 AM
Amazing poem ya..sure sweep;)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/14/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you again, Madhupriya! I appreciate your visit and supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra

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