Darkness of the Mind

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For the contest by: Russell Sivey Titled: In the Dark.

Written for those who suffer with this debilitating disease, depresssion.

I live with family memers who suffer and so I try to understand and help. This is dedicated to them.

Un-illuminated is his life Even the night is starless Concealed in pathways of his mind Darkness creeps between sense and sanity Consequence of this mental distress Reaching and pulling the dearest who reside Downward current to an explosive land mine Will the absence of glorious light return to his chamber

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Joe Dimino

Date: 10/1/2019 3:16:00 PM

Terrible debilitation; this work says a lot about the condition. There is hope. Hang in there all. Prayer and faith can do miracles. Not to say, you will not battle...but God and you are a majority.

Margaret Franceschini
Date: 10/1/2019 4:11:00 PM

Thank you for your awesome encouragement. I agree. Without God I would not survive. Bless you!

Kishan Sharma

Date: 5/16/2018 8:15:00 PM

Nice one

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/27/2017 4:51:00 PM

"Darkness creeps between sense and sanity" Wow, this is amazing, Margaret. Very well-expressed!

Margaret Franceschini
Date: 10/27/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thank you dear poetess.

Joseph May

Date: 10/22/2017 8:21:00 PM

Searching for a gleam...Nicely penned Margaret

Margaret Franceschini
Date: 10/23/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my darkness.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2017 10:47:00 PM

A deep poem Margaret about the darkness some people experience and live with and its effects on loved ones. Beautifully written with poignant poetic expression throughout, but to me, your first stanza is superb in emotive imagery...

Margaret Franceschini
Date: 10/15/2017 8:38:00 AM

I appreciate so much your encouragement and knowledge in this poem. Hugs