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Darkness Befalls Me

scared, alone broke down on dark highway creepy willows, hover over me waiting for a sign of headlights but to no avail-none i debate to walk slowly creeping through woods fog thicker than lard water gushing in open-toed shoes till i see a dim light wooded cabin tucked away shadowed by redwoods i knock-no answer i enter cautiously sit by fireplace as i remove my wet shoes there's a towel hung over rocking chair as if waiting for methen it hits me i've been here before locked in a closet by some crazed maniac i slowly step to the closet door turn the knob crouched in corner scared, alone looking into my eyes another young soul taken before her time i retrace my steps and remember when i was 16 driving down this dark highway when my car broke down thinking someone would help waking to being tied and tortured till i no longer breathed scared and alone karen croft

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Date: 4/23/2012 6:34:00 AM
gripping stuff you wrote here Karin, the whole story came to live as I read it. love your work Lancelot
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