Darkness and the Sun

Sky, quite cold and grey The sun shines through very bright Keeps darkness freeze out Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2012 11:33:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your descriptive lines..It is the Light that keeps the freeze out of our hearts..I am glad that you enjoyed my work..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/2/2012 1:13:00 PM

My son and I just got back from the bookstore to read some poetry. He is trying to learn haiku..I tell ya, Russell...the Japanese wrote some pretty darn boring haiku..I am more enthralled with the Poetry Soup poets come up with..I must be unconventional, right? Did u write about this describing Ohio weather? I walked 3.5 mi today and this poem is what I was surrounded by! ha ha. ps...hurricaine was just an expression to show the extreme...I wanted the audience to stop and think blizzard..very funny!