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Darkness Alone

Darkness Alone Here I walk, Here I'm trembling I was here in darkness alone Here the bats fastly flying Here the wind whispers and flown. Here I lay, Here I'm sleeping I was here in darkness alone Here the rats fastly walking Here the footsteps are audible. Here I run, Here I feared I was here in darkness alone Here my hands cold and dead Here the raindrops are invisible. Here I see, Here I noticed I was here in darkness alone Here a man wore in black Here I feared and run back. Here I think, Here I whisper I was here in darkness alone Here I guess what to do Here the man is waiting too. Here I lay, here I wake I was not in darkness alone Here I was on my bed Here a nightmare just like dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 12:35:00 AM
Angelo, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:39:00 PM
Angelo:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:44:00 PM
Angelo, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/23/2015 5:39:00 PM
Sad, but I'm glad/ that you came out of your shell/ you'll see young lad/ life at soup's fun I can tell...:D Warm welcome, kabayan. Poetry Soup is a community of mostly warm, friendly, kindhearted souls. Enjoy a cuppa each day. Visit other pages as well. You'll be amazed by how much one can learn just reading their creative pieces. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim
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Angelo Faunillo
Date: 2/24/2015 9:12:00 PM
thank you very much.... I really enjoy this community and I hope it could help me building my dreams to become a poet.. thanks a lot.. your reads and comments inspires me to continue what I am doing ..
Date: 2/22/2015 3:15:00 PM
Angelo, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:57:00 AM
- A "lonely" and touching poem, thank you for sharing - I welcome you to the P- Soup! - Read and comments .... and you will not be lonely :) - Nice to meet you, I wish you a great Sunday :) - Anne-Lise (Norway :)
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Angelo Faunillo
Date: 2/24/2015 9:15:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem... It is such an honor to met poets like you,... :)

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