Darkness

I found my life in a psychologicaly uncovered darkness. I feel sorry for everybody who feel the need to enter it. When memories light me I want to erase them all. I climb through branches to the peak of the tree to reach the sky and finally let go of it. I don't want my emocions to be center of attention, but my creations. In every step forward I feel pain, but in step back even more. I don't want to be the one who didn't say its last, I want to seak for time when I don't fear the darkness. I don't envy you and I wish you well, but too well, I say, quickly changes path.

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/19/2016 5:54:00 PM

Hi Lana,I'm standing outside of the door and saying hello. Hello

Lana Lana
Date: 5/13/2016 10:24:00 AM

Thank you very much..

Chelsea Zayas

Date: 2/21/2016 8:04:00 PM

This is very dark, but very expressive. Great job!! Chelsea

Lana Lana
Date: 3/11/2016 8:59:00 AM

Thank you much... :)

Skat A

Date: 4/15/2015 6:33:00 PM

LANA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lana Lana
Date: 5/11/2015 2:07:00 AM

Thank you for your support.... Hugs* :P I thank you for your sweet Welcome. I'll be pleased to tell you a bit about myself and I hope you'd tell me about yourself too.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2015 8:35:00 PM

Lana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Lana Lana
Date: 5/11/2015 2:04:00 AM

Thank you :)