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Darkness

Darkness grows inside of me, my mortal soul stained black, So many years I believed in you then you stabbed me in the back. You broke your promise and abused my trust, Set me a light Till I was but dust. My light has gone the darkness in control, I have been reborn to destroy your soul. To make you suffer and destroy your life, Straight from my back I’ll use the same knife. As the darkness takes over and sets in like tar You can try running but you won’t get that far.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/8/2014 11:53:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jasmin - I choose your first great, touching,deep and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:29:00 AM
Very passionate, real, raw.. I love it. a seven .. bravo!!~Joel
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Jasmin Mcdougall
Date: 12/8/2014 2:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, that means a lot to me.

Book: Shattered Sighs