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I sit here in the darkness Hoping for a dance Looking to the future Singing my soul to sleep again! With Angels to fly Trying to stay a float They say I am holding on And slowly sinking the boat! I do not want to go outside this night It’s too cold For Angels to fly Saying things are Going to change But the emptiness Just doesn’t understand! Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/13/2014 3:09:00 PM
Hi Brooke, nice to know you I especially love the part, "hoping for a dance" and "but the emptiness doesn't understand hinting at metaphors'. Great poem, my compliments!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 3:18:00 PM
THANK you Ralph... I will come visit you.. nice to meet you
Date: 5/13/2014 2:03:00 PM
A very beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thankyou Roger
Date: 5/13/2014 8:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem of yours. One little part reminded me of that song on the radio about angels! The imagery of sinking the boat was cool!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 9:40:00 AM
THANKYOU Andrea... hugs

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