Darkness

The Darkness has become my light The Darkness has become my right The Darkness is now my sight The darkness has engulfed my life Now I am afraid of the light

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/29/2011 7:34:00 AM

You have written a magic of darkness along with hidden magic of all. If one is accustomed with a particular thing or habit, he normally refuses the opposite. Nice look of depth.

Date: 6/18/2011 3:38:00 PM

So powerful, I actually felt these words reading this poem. What a talent, short poem but deep feeling. Awesome a 7 deserved Hemi!!

Date: 6/18/2011 3:38:00 PM

So powerful, I actually felt these words reading this poem. What a talent, short poem but deep feeling. Awesome a 7 deserved Hemi!!

James Jan

Date: 6/18/2011 5:16:00 AM

How true this can be....powerful words and hope the lightness finds you. Its easier to live in the dark than to move to the light.

Date: 6/18/2011 5:06:00 AM

A good play on words N :)

Shannon Deane

Date: 6/18/2011 4:21:00 AM

Another well written rhyme, keep writing... will be waiting to read more... shannon