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Darkness

Dark Pervades Silence rules Curtains of clouds Hide and seek unfolds Moaning of wind Owl's eyes flash Fright fills Gloom Placed: 1st Say It In Nine - Old or New Poetry Contest Ninette poetry form only. Sponsored by: Joseph May Syllable Check: howmany syllables Date: 16-08-2022

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2022 10:02:00 AM

Wonderfully spooky Patri. Your vivid images create the scene of gloomy anxiety. Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/24/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/20/2022 4:53:00 AM

Vivid scenic imagery. Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/21/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/19/2022 8:18:00 PM

This poem would be perfect for Halloween. It is my favorite holiday because my three children used to celebrate their birthdays on that day. They are all born in the first week of November. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/21/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind compliments.

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2022 6:44:00 AM

Dark clouds and the eerie moan of the wind spells gloom, Wonderful write Patri, Congrats on your win

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/21/2022 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments!