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The Grim Reaper came to call But found I was not at home Skydiving in my freefall Below the reaper did roam While out white-water rafting With a frightening scythe he stood My demise he was planning Secrets held beneath his hood Upon the shore he waited As I fished in the ocean I knew my time was dated As he set wheels in motion He follows me all the time His presence I can’t ignore As through life’s journey I climb There’s so much left to explore He will come for me one day And there’ll be no turning back He’ll not find me in dismay As his scythe takes its whack Another soul he must claim And he knows that more will come Artists take their shot at fame As the Reaper beats his drum
*Inspired by Emily Dickinson’s “Because I Could Not Stop for Death” Entry for PD's "Dark Woods" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/23/2011 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Dark Woods" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 9:27:00 PM
once again a such well penned piece for all to read no worder they say a master of words thank you love duncan and ceizar xxx
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Date: 11/22/2011 2:23:00 PM
"As the reaper beats his drum." Like a heart beat. You penned a good one here old dear. Love, daver
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Date: 11/22/2011 8:43:00 AM
Nicely written Carolyn. Enjoyed this one. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:21:00 PM
with beard white as alabaster, ole johnson's searching some, styx an Charon boat the master, be bribed so you won't come...
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Date: 11/21/2011 10:35:00 PM
such vividness and as well darkness that you have penned my friend,,,Congratulations to you on your win,,,all the best to you,,and again as always Thank You for all your visits to me words,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/20/2011 7:33:00 AM
this is a good entry. kind of dark , but i guess it's suppose to be. john
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Date: 11/19/2011 3:48:00 PM
Oh, wow. This is a wonderful dark entry...the grim reaper will have NO HOLD on YOU. Love the rhyming lines turning back-scythe takes its whack...powerful lines. Good luck, darling. You'll never believe which poem I entered...The Trophy Tree that I wrote with Julian, my son. One of my all time favorites..and one of yours too I see. :) You have been the most inspirational person to me on this site...I love u for spurring this lil babe along, Carolyn. HUGS, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/19/2011 3:10:00 PM
Yes, you'll sure give old Grim Reaper a run for his money, love, LOL. He'll probably give up and whack someone else with his scythe
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Date: 11/19/2011 1:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this expressive and emotive work about death and facing one's own death..Reads like a winning entry to me..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara
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