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Dark Silence

A dark castle Rose from the ashes Of a broken dream. A sinister presence Crept through the empty rooms. The light from a blood-red moon Danced in the shadows of a haunted forest. And every scream that was not heard Echoed in the silence of passing time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/25/2015 4:51:00 PM
Love the way you write :)
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Elizabeth Agiantritis
Date: 7/26/2015 2:13:00 PM
Nice of you to say!
Date: 7/24/2015 3:58:00 AM
Ooooh... this is so chilling. I really dig it! Those last two lines though... epic!Always, Laura
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Elizabeth Agiantritis
Date: 7/24/2015 6:07:00 AM
I'm glad to have managed to convey a sense of dread!

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