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Dark Place

Someone please save me from the voices in my head. Iv made friends with the monster hiding  under my bed. He says he understands, the voices just won't quit, down deep in my stomach there's an empty pit. Staring into the darkness I see my worst fears. Begging for someone to save me, but yet Noone hears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/7/2015 7:29:00 PM
Hi Nicole, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/2/2015 1:23:00 AM
nice nicole
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Date: 12/1/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hi Nicole, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/30/2015 9:24:00 AM
Nicole, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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