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Dark Ocean

Corrupt and 
Convoluted thoughts
Swimming through 
The dark ocean
Of my brain 
Like hungry sharks 
Blindly drawn 
To fresh blood
Every fiber explodes 
With adrenaline-charged 
Hot vibrant ticking 
Like electricity
On unseen currents and 
To a fine point.

Copyright © Kelly McDonald

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  1. Date: 2/1/2012 11:41:00 AM
    I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Kelly. Love and best wishes always, Carol