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Dark Libertine

Tattered clobbered thoughts streaming to winged dusts, spiral spasms tremble amid weary sounds. The festal moods swing dreary interludes, visions ache release with defloration-- throaty cries heightens the greedy man's lust. He longs to possess the murmur of blood from naked images throbbing desires, it surges -- tinged to his cerebellum. Dark libertine drained his desirous juice-- madness stings deep-- displayed to his ardor. Boorish bashfulness etched into each itch cracking unto his left to right onslaught. Finitude fair Venus choked with disgust as she wriggles, wriggles to free herself! Her wriggles useless from black libertine... Pristine Venus fallen-- now wanting death. ©O. E. Guillermo 5:15pm December 05, 2014 Sponsor Giorgio A. V. Contest Name Structured forms - Iambic verse - Sketch a fictitious character - (Top Gun Poetry) Placed 6th

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/17/2015 11:36:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem Olive ! Great work on dark poetry!

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 9:51:00 PM

Hi Olive, Congrats on your win. ~SKAT~

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/14/2015 8:14:00 PM

Olive, l just stopped by to say congrats on your win:-)Alexis

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/21/2015 12:45:00 AM

Thanks much Alexis.. =`)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2015 7:10:00 PM

Olive, :) Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Poem for One Victim" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/21/2015 12:44:00 AM

Thanks much Linda.. I ahve not been in Soup this past days 'cause of personal reasons. Thanks much for seeing this poem as a worthy winner.. !=`)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 4:40:00 PM

:):) :)LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/22/2015 7:57:00 PM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 9:26:00 PM

OLIVE, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/26/2014 11:39:00 PM

Lolly Linda thanks much.. hugs and hugs.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/18/2014 8:44:00 AM

Wow, so powerful. Congratulations on your win Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/21/2014 7:24:00 AM

thanks much Brenda.. :)!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2014 5:57:00 PM

dark descriptive and very powerful write Olive - congrats:-) Hugs jan x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 8:16:00 AM

Thanks much JAn.. :)! I appreciate your drop by.. :)! GBU hugs and mwah!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2014 5:16:00 AM

Though dark but very meaningful write, congratulations on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 8:13:00 AM

Thank much Dr. Ram.. :) I appreciate you coming to visit my work and among all the people in soup you are the ever first to fave my work.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2014 12:41:00 PM

This is very powerful and expressive Olive_eloi! When lust becomes uncontrollable the results can be most horrible and unpardonable. Fallen Venus is now "imploring death." hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 10:40:00 PM

yes that's exactly what I want to portray here.. :) thanks PAul.. :)! hugs too.. :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2014 7:24:00 AM

this heart touching very beautifully penned olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 10:39:00 PM

thanks much Liam.. :)! I appreciate this drop by.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 12/7/2014 11:22:00 AM

Deep and Dark, as if ones awaiting an Abyss to swallow them. Having read a few of your poems now Olive, some old, some new. Your writing is growing, and it's going to grow even more, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/27/2015 5:57:00 PM

Yes I have been busy for awhile.. :)

James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:30:00 PM

Being busy does stop us from writing. Windows of opportunity will always pop up, it's making use of them if one wants, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 3:44:00 AM

thanks much James.. :) i appreciate your every drop.. :) i have not have so much time to write these past days.. :) i have some poems stuck up but they are unfinished.. weeee.. seems i can;t post them unfinished.. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2014 8:45:00 AM

Interesting lines penned..I found it a deep work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 3:30:00 AM

thanks Much Sara.. :)! God bless you.. !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2014 8:25:00 PM

It sounds like a horrible struggle ensuing!! I don't know well this story you are writing of but you did a good job of making it quite eerie!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/7/2014 7:36:00 AM

indeed Andie this what I want to portray.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/6/2014 8:47:00 AM

Finitude fair Venus choked with disgust---very dissolute lover indeed.. Very bleak. Love XXX rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/7/2014 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Rajat.. :) somehow I want to sketch a character that seems different to what I write always so this comes. :)!