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Dark Gray

dark gray weighted clouds hide a summer's sun... swallows fly and feed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/8/2015 1:31:00 PM
Sara , beauty in a few words 7 and thanks for visiting my Seuss poem
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Date: 8/7/2015 5:14:00 PM
that describes Utah today. Grrrr I want the sun to come out!! (maybe I will see our swallow neighbors too)
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Date: 8/6/2015 11:18:00 PM
A gloomy day can make us and the animals feel like hibernating, as if it were winter... A very nice haiku, Sara. Well written, I enjoyed it!
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:55:00 AM
Nice one! I like the imagery.
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