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Dark Eyes

cold foggy day misty bridge presence felt dark hot eyes aglow with pain reaching out my eyes devour the stillness fingers touch By- Tahera Mannan For Michael’s contest, ‘Eyes First Meet’

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tahera in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:27:00 PM

lovely entry Tahera, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 2:05:00 PM

Oh, here is another one I just loved the first time I saw it.congratulations on your win, Tahera,this one was awesome.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations Tahera, on your win in in Michael's contest.. Hope your weekend is a good one ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 6:28:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on another super win with this beautiful write--kashinath

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 2:21:00 AM

love these first time round, even better second time, very profound are these, your words say so much Tahera. Harry

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:53:00 AM

Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Tahera. Wonderful string Senryu. Lainie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/2/2011 1:32:00 AM

Fabulous write in very few words.Congratulations on your win.Gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/2/2011 12:03:00 AM

few words but with such an impact, really enjoyed this one, Tahera :) Super congrats on your win :) hugs

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 6:05:00 PM

Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Michael, Tahera

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 3:01:00 PM

devouring, tahera.. congrats on winning big here! :) hugggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 2:57:00 PM

Amazing win Tahera! Congratulations on your 5th Place Win in Michael's Contest. Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:38:00 PM

It's great to see your poem in the winners' circle, Tahera. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:24:00 PM

COngrats my dear on your win in my contest...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:23:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your wonderful win in Michael's cool contest my friend.. for this exciting entry ... enjoy another chart topping win so well deserved my friend..

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/28/2011 7:57:00 AM

I like these, Tahera, good luck in contest. Harry

James Fraser

Date: 3/27/2011 8:22:00 AM

Wonderful Senryu series Tahera, a joy to read this Sunday afternoon. Good luck in Michael's contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2011 11:45:00 AM

I really like the way his dark eyes reached out and devoured you. Love at first sight for sure, Tahera. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/26/2011 10:12:00 AM

The cold, still, darkness is artfully eclipsed by the searing eyes! A well-conceived verse.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 7:23:00 AM

oh, it's bluesy, but so wonderful too. eyes devour the stillness. This is an awesome line. I hope this does well. So descriptive, sweetie!