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Returning back to earth, elements five, that that remains, is essence of presence, spirit unfettered, here on earth to jive, until ego stifles soul’s innocence, whereupon veiled remains luminescence, with attention orbiting narrow grooves, enmeshed in desires, conscience disapproves, remaining thus in hypnotic slumber, bleeding needlessly under dream form hooves, plunged in darkness, by fears that encumber. 06-March-2022

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Date: 3/6/2022 7:16:00 PM
"spirit unfettered, here on earth to jive, until ego stifles soul’s innocence," Beautiful! We are not here to be popular...keep planting your seeds of enlightenment~do not doubt your value.... That is the enemy's game. Blessings!
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:22:00 PM
Indeed. We need to de-hypnotise ourselves

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