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Dark Days of Reverie

Written by Broken Wings I am thinking today of my sweet cat, She is buried in the shade of a tree; My sadness is so deep and dark Lord, Why give this love and take it away? I have put to rest so many, Pets full of unconditional love; My heart is shattered each time, Each time, I have to bury love. My grievance demonstrates my love, Shedding another tear for my cat; Oh sadness I miss her tender touch, I wish my precious pets were here. Sorrow lays beneath a tree, I stare in wonder to heaven; Are my pets looking down at me? With heartache, I say goodbye. _________________________________ August 1, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Dark Days Of Reverie Copyright Protected, ID 15-696-543-0 all Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Collaboration Celebration, sponsor, Poet Destroyer Fifth Place

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Date: 9/4/2015 11:13:00 PM
So beautiful in its sadness and inspiring message of future hope after death. I have never replaced my dog, Midnight, after he passed on back in 1983... Great poem on the depth of losing a beloved pet!!!
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Date: 9/3/2015 3:50:00 PM
Hey Broken Wings, congratulations to you on your win in Linda's amazing contest! This is a beautiful tribute to your pets and an excellent collaboration with Linda. They do fill up our lives with that unconditional love. Well deserving win! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:00:00 AM
B.W., BIG congratulations on your wonderful win! An absolutely brilliant work of art with collaboration with Linda Well done. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/2/2015 11:08:00 PM
Congrats broken for a deserved big win with this very beautiful collaboration with Linda! Loved this one the most!
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:15:00 PM
I think I like this one as one of my favorites that PD did with someone, because of the topic naturally and I just liked the simple style you both used. Awesome, and congrats.
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Date: 9/2/2015 5:42:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2015 3:05:00 PM
Linda mirrors your style so well Broken Wings congrats on a wonderful collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:38:00 PM
Hello Broken, this was a wonderful and different from all I write. I want to thank you over and over... :), Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/1/2015 8:43:00 PM
Broken, my part's on its way. I guess, I found a little something inside me, that could relate. Love LINDA
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Date: 8/1/2015 9:57:00 PM
WOW, that is awesome!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2015 9:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda for the opportunity to write with you, it is an honor.

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