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Dark Dawn

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Dark Dawn

Dawn hopeful, expectant tantalizing, exhilarating, inviting friends, citizens, government, politicians inciting, embezzling, dictating greedy, covetous Darkness

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  1. Date: 1/1/2015 3:41:00 AM
    Happy New Year to you and family, Vicky. Be blessed in all your endeavors! Scribe

  1. Date: 10/24/2014 1:24:00 PM
    You have set up a real nice diamante poem, perfectly balanced, well done :)

  1. Date: 10/22/2014 10:23:00 PM
    Nice, me like

  1. Date: 9/30/2014 2:47:00 PM
    Amazing piece Vicky :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2014 7:49:00 AM
    You express the complicated within the simplicity of this piece.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Vicky, lovely transition from day to night, congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 3:26:00 AM
    a societal rant so well expressed, vicky.. sweet winning cheers to you!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 11:41:00 PM
    wow you turned it political. Very creative. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Vicky---Nice diamante and many congrats on your win in the contest!! Enjoy your day, Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:11:00 PM
    Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Vicky

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:37:00 AM
    How few words do magic, you know well to get done. Really a dark dawn is seen in this present world. Beautifully done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:39:00 AM
    very , very nice Vicky,, I should try writing like this one day ;} thank you for reading my haiku " Floodgates" ;}

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Hi Vicky - Your poetry is tantalizing. It makes me wonder about you, your experiences, the well of your sense of injustice. You have a powerful talented voice through your poetry. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:30:00 AM
    you spelt it all out.Great poem. Thank you for taking the time out to read my poem I hope you will stop past again. MUCH LOVE!

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Excellent verse! Love how it started out, and then how it ended in complete darkness. The dawn of darkness has cometh! hehe. Anyway, great one. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Wow..this is so cool! I've never heard of this form before. It really draws you in. You can picture it in you mind...Thanks for your comment. I wrote a Chokra (?) ..check it out! Thanks, Holly

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 10/29/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Will do.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:42:00 AM
    Clever and nice write.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 4:58:00 AM
    so ... conscious of the darkness enveloping the entire earth with its man-led governance ... too grinding a greediness that men find inability to confront ... sadly everywhere you too ... cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! canny

    Amah Avatar Canny Amah
    Date: 10/26/2012 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    so conscious of the darkness enveloping the entire earth with its man-led governance ... too grinding a greediness that men find inability to confront ... sadly everywhere you turn ... cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! canny